Sunday, April 24, 2011

Loyal love..

 His heart leapt in joy when he saw her coming.

 He had refused to believe that she dumped him.

 He had missed her fragrance around the house.

 There was so much he wanted to tell her, but all he did when she  hugged him, stroking his head was

Bowwow...

and he licked her face.



P.S : My first attempt at 55 fiction... Tried to keep it as simple as possible...

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice start

Phewww said...

hehe nice..........

n hey thanks for the tag.. :)

Red Handed said...

heh cho cute

Ankita said...

loved both of them!
first was was eerily stirring and the second one, very sweet!

:)

Ankita said...

sorry, I read your 55 fic 'suicide and diary' one on another tab...posted the comments here :)

maithili said...

Thank you Ankita :)